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[Rig - What if? (Opening Act)]

yeah, pretty much same as fight scene

though i liked the intro and outro a lot, they make it sound kinda scary and tense. mad props!
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Rig responds:

Yeah, "Fight Scene" is a selection of this song. Thanks!

[Rig - What if? (Fight Scene)]

intense

just, the drums sounded too high and airy. otherwise this is a pretty sweet loop!
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Rig responds:

Airy, eh? Thanks for the review!

[Bleed On Me--_--]

pretty cool

i thought it sounded really lame and crappy at the beginning, but once the actual power came on it was very decent. really emotional and powerful. i like it! jst, i dont like the intro lol
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PERVOK responds:

The entire song doesn't have to be pleasing :/ If the entire song reeked of awesome, there'd like, be no room for the song to get more awesome as it progresses along.

[Lunacy]

decent composing, but...

that electric guitar is just painful, and the drums just sound weak.... distort the drums some more, and please work on that elec. guitar sample. the actual notes and stuff were good tho, and that piano made a nice atmosphere.
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InfinityAmbience responds:

I fully appreciate your honesty and yes, I will be sure to work on my samples of drums and electric guitars, this is only for my demo cd if I was to make a real one the music you will find will be alot better =). I'll see if I can post some remastered versions of my music. Thank you again.

[Background for menu 2]

nice

this was pretty chill. my only suggestion is that the drums sound almost too perfect... that computer generated sound. rough them up a bit!
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No1r responds:

hello p4c,
i have to agree with you..Drums are sequenced (as the rest) that's why the sound is too perfect: rimtically and with almost any dynamics.
I'm working to get better :)
Thanks for cheking it out.

[Party Like A Schoolgirl!]

haha kinda spastic, but i like it

this was pretty cool. like how its all chopped up, and that random flutey sample. mixes interestingly.
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TheCriminalDuder responds:

'Kay. :3

[Riffage]

work on mastering and beat, but the melodies=good.

yeah, everything sounded so high and airy, but i dont think these need to be real instruments. just have a greater variety on it, stronger bass.

also this is in dire need of a better beat than that. its so soft, and even at that, its bad since the samples are just lame and unedited.

melodywise, i thought this was very decent. gj on that :)
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TheRamener responds:

thanks :) i don't have very many instruments available to me on garageband as my jampacks have not come across yet (bt). I don't tend to use loops (although the drum part in this is one. my other song on ng is entirely written by me.)

anyhow, thank you for the suggestions!

[13th August 2007 (WIP)]

its okay, but you need more than hawt drums.

ok, you got the drums down, but ur missing the bass, and any other elements apart from random synth falls and some really soft chords for about 8 measures.

also, although in this state it is very repetitive, with some actual synths and stuff playing along, the beats turn out to have a pretty good variety. i thought the beats were very decent.
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WizardSleeve responds:

Missing the bass? Do you have crappy PC speakers or something? There is a big booming 808 bass in there... I will admit my phone can't pick it up, but any half decent speakers can hear it...

its a drumfunk dnb track, its about atmosphere, sub bass, and hectic drums.. not everyones taste though, thanks for the review :)

[Vacuum]

pretty cool.

the intro waas really nice. though the pad that came in after seemed too loud, and the lead synth [the high one that folllows that electric-guitar-esque thing] is lame on its own, so forget about that interlude. Together though, it sounded very retro and cool. this was actually a pretty decent song imo, but it needs more variety and better mastering.
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agent727 responds:

thx a lot for the review. i just got madtracker2 two days ago so im still learning how to use it properly. the main thing right now that im working on is finding the right instruments for the songs. outside of the computer techno stuff, i play guitar an my brother plays drums, so eventually im gonna try to work it all together. btw, checking out ur stuff now :]

[fallen idol]

pretty good :)

once the bass kicked in it was actually pretty cool. i think it would be better if you added some soft pads to emphasize teh dramatic feel of this song. also the lead synth was okay but i think that there could be better. i dont know what though ;)

gj! this track was cool.
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Stan-SB responds:

lol i forgot about that this piece happened in about 2-3 hours so imissed it out by accident