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[RainForestTears]

creepy

i just think the drums could use work, they seem a little out of place. otherwise, gj :) i liked the spooktasticness.
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LollipopNightmare responds:

thank you for your comment! i checked out your stuff and me likey! =)

[nBIZ Rmx "Basshunter-Camilla"]

yum

i never listen to basshunter so i cant say i recognize the song, but ill review how it is, and as i hear it. startinggg NOW:

ok, so i like the intro, as a random suggestion, if ur able to automate the frequency of the lead synth in FL [idk since i use reason], start it from low and make it go high--that sounds sweet hehehe

i thought this was good overall, though it sounded like the beat was a little off of the music if u listen to it carefully. the whole thing was a little cliched, so i kinda get biased against that, sorry lol. but overall tight!! gj.

p.s. you should get the full fl studio, not the demo :DD something to look forward to, not too bad for a new audio guy [i started like a year and a half ago :D]

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nBIZ responds:

thanks for the review :D
and yes i am looking foward to buying the full version in the future!
and i also checked out your audio and i like what i hear : )

[Im Bad]

lol

id have to agree with the dude below me, ur kinda weird lol... i guess it is kinda mischievous though haha

really simple, all i can say. btw this isnt dnb [no i didnt vote off of that. yes i do know there is no breakbeat category or anything.] fun to listen to, gj.
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explode-a-tom responds:

well im a weird kid. im actually bad most of every day. lolz

[Hellwars]

YAYYYAY!

this reminded me of the good old days after 8-bit but before full-on recorded music in games, like ff7. and it was made well. i like, i like. you get a 5 :)

thx for the review btw :)

JakesFable responds:

No problem man and thanks for this review it really helps ;)

[-~Blue Depths~-]

peaceful :)

i like. its really calming, imo.

some suggestions: 1) the flute can be tweaked a bit. try modulating volume for fun, and then try using LFO on the pitch [so that it jiggles a bit up and down] at certain points, i think it would be very emotional.

also i think the flute should have such an airy-sounding attack on every note.

2) i wish throughout the 2:30 some instruments could have been added and removed... etc--more climactic imo.

So yeah, overall, i thought this was very nice, but some tweakage could make it even better. gj!!! i approve :D
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scoutzero responds:

I'll use your suggestions when I'm working on something else, and hopefully it will be better. :)

I will check out your stuff as soon as I have the chance. Thanks!

[Ballerina Nightmare]

tastyyy

man this is getting rated so harshly, ill comment this way--it is what it is. its not a song, its not a full composition, maybe some background stuff in a flash id say.

the bells' contrasting melodies made it sound kinda interesting since it sounds like such a happy instrument. im seeing... some kinda tense, calm before the storm sort of scene :D

though i do think it could use some more elements imho, and i wish it was slower.

ty for the rev!! ill think about collabbing as i get more time on my hands and drive in my work ethic, but we'll figure somethign out ;D

GronmonSE responds:

Haha, I don't mind the low scores on this one. It's really a quickjob that I decided to submit as a loop, hoping someone would use it as a background sound for their flash. Yes, that's the feeling I was aiming for.

Thanks for the review :D

[High-Energy (Mix 2)]

funnnn

i liked the beat and the synth choices, fx, and everything, this is a pretty good song :D jst some things sound kinda hesitant [like one of the synths starts stutterring for some reason lol idk if its just me] and the mixing is kinda muddy, but otherwise very tighthttt!!
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vipertarun responds:

Thanx bro............the stuttering maybe due to the echo and reverb.........its not you even i felt it............thanx for the review............and im just checking out your stuff!!!!!!!!

[All-Your-Base-Are-Belong-To-Us]

i like it!!

the vox were done really well, and the arrangemnt of notes was pretty decent. it was pretty dramatic. i give mad props haha. i think the mixing could use a little work, the drums get kinda muddy [try equing up the high frequencies and stuff] and i think bassline could be stronger incomparison to the lead synth. otherwise tite work!!

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Evil-Gandalf responds:

Thanks for the review! I appreciate your comments. I really haven't experimented a lot with equalizing, and I don't know much about it. I know how to do it, though I don't know where to do it any why.

Drums are my largest weak point. I really don't have a lot of stuff to work with, though I do the best I can without throwing in the overly used fruity kick every beat.

As soon as I get the time I will indeed check out your songs.

[SysRq-The World At Its Best]

reason 4 indeed does rock my socks

yeah, this was okay, but make the drums louder and some of your leads lower and more passive imo that would make it sound better and less cheesy. having those basic waveforms at high octaves jst sounds cheesy to me, idk lol

but yes reason 4 is titee!! ive been experimenting with it too lol
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SysRq00 responds:

Yerr, like I said I'm just kinda messing around right now. Thanks for the advice, I'm liking this mixer much better than the one in FL. It's a bit more intuitive, and I think I'll really be able play with it a lot more than I did in FL. Thanks for the review, I'll be sure to go check out your stuff when I get the chance. <3

~SysRq

[C3 - Submarine [LOOP]]

cool

its a little too empty, the drums drown out the ambient effects in the back, and hte lead melody thing was nice. but this does sound slick. electro is fun :)
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C3NTAURI0N responds:

Ok, Taking this into account I am going to revise the effects of this and should have a second and should submit the better version before christmas. Thanks for the review
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