hmmm
this was okay. 1) this isnt really dnb if you ask me, but thats okay. 2) the synth effects were nice 3) severe lack of bass sounds, even if this is a light song 4) the drums themselves felt too light to really improve the track much. 5) the existing bassline is kind of annoying 6) i understand the song is meant to be ambient, but nothing really happens throughout the song.
good job though! and if u want check out my 2 lonely audio submissions :D