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uhhh

isnt that just a preset drum loop from fruity loops? you gotta do better than that. But the glitching at the beginning and end, and the frequency modulation later on were good editions to that so i give u some kudos.

plus there is no bass... this is drum AND BASS dude lol. finally, the piano was really lame. sooo pretty bland submission man. you can do better!!

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[Production -XvN-]

tasty

i liked ur main synth, with the flanging/freq. modulation, delay line, and snappyness, gj on that! this just seemed too toned down, and the percussion was almost nonexistant so i think that oculd be worked on.

also, i suggest adding in more instruments than just a bassline, a lead, and some really soft snares and hats. some pads and more intricate countermelodies would be cool imo. gj on a third submission though, i hope u do great stuff later on :D

and now.. reciprocate my friend. leave me a review :DD

[[{*LeORiC*}]]

oh my gizzawd

the atmosphere is so deeep and immersive, and the screams and triangles ohh damn. jst, osme of the brass seemed to make it less fierce. but still, VERY NICE.

the distortion was even good to some extent--made everything sound like it trembled.... though that could be fixed too.

gj!!!
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[You're Pathetic!]

haha wow

compared with the themes to the rest of this game this sounds so cartoony haha i still wonder what this flash submission is like. lolllll, well thanks for killing me after i listened to ur victory theme *glare*

itsameyayo responds:

No problem ;) (jk :P)

*glare*?

*stare* >:( (lol)

And this is for everyone, but the game is about a bunch of misfit superheros, the flash game will be called "Secondhand Superheros." And this game is going to be epic :D

-Thanks for 3 reviews now :D

-ImperfectDisciple

[Victory is Yours!]

YAYAYAA!!

I AM SO TRIUMPHANT RIGHT NOW.

itsameyayo responds:

Yay! Now if you want, check out the other song, it's the complete opposite of this one (the You're Pathetic one...even though your not).

-ImperfectDisciple

p.s. THANKS!

[Melodic Erotica]

badass.

yeah, the mixing needs some work. but apart from that this is pretty tight.

i liked the slow oscillation on that reesey bass sound, along with the slight ambient touches--they are pretty cool.

the onyl thing i can ask for right now is this: i dont think the acousticy drums really fit in with this synth-heavy song--try some more glitchy, electonic drums :D the arrangement is really cool already, but that kinda throws off the vibe of the song. otherwise, GJ!

Quarl responds:

Thanks, glad you liked it. I'd love to try out glitch drums but again, kind of limited in garage band... dunno. Maybe it's just me :P

[Antagonist (Re-master)]

yum

haha i remember this when you first made it a logn time ago. thanks for taking out the stupid screams haha

i guess there isnt much more for me to say, except that t his is a solid song. though the bass is still a little bit too spastic and really soft and weak. otherwise, gj :D

i cant wait to hear from you now that your out of garageband. have fun with reason!! [i use that too :D]
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check my mac8 contest submission as well dawgg :)

Quarl responds:

Sure will man!

[Nene's Theme (TLS2/MAC8)]

woahhh man

pretty sweet i gotta say. i love the glitching and the repetition of the samples, it all sounded really funky and rebellious, and definately nene-esque, gj on that!

just.. a little too random [oh crap i think i told u that before in a review a long time ago... and i know the response: that means less loogiesquared!!] well that criticism still stands haha

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loogiesquared responds:

LESS rondom?! that would make it LESS loogiesquared!
(deja vu, man)

[Territory WAR | Island rumble]

POWER OVERWHELMING

this thing has got some serious fierceness to it i gotta say... lets go rape and pillage on the warpath bithcessss!

just, sometimes it seems like the elec. guitar gets off tempo lol. otherwise, tighttt :D

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DarKsidE555 responds:

Well, we'll see when the game is done. :)

Naa, guitars are all fine with the beat. Don't worry about that. I check ya submission when I get the time for it! Thanks for checking!

[Progressive Mechanical Anger]

yummm

not really dark techno, more jst like a dark breakbeat.

but, it did get the dark feeling across, gj! the clap-esque thing sounded really cool how it jst kinda breaks down, and the synthwork is very solid.

my suggestions: more ambient sounds to get the mechanical feeling across. and this is too repetitive IMHO, but that isn't a major problem. kudos on a sweet submission!
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BlueSkar23 responds:

i checked out your mac8 song, it was pretty sweet. =) i have to say that its way better than my songs. Thats kinda obvious considering that i've just started making music lol