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peaceful :)

i like. its really calming, imo.

some suggestions: 1) the flute can be tweaked a bit. try modulating volume for fun, and then try using LFO on the pitch [so that it jiggles a bit up and down] at certain points, i think it would be very emotional.

also i think the flute should have such an airy-sounding attack on every note.

2) i wish throughout the 2:30 some instruments could have been added and removed... etc--more climactic imo.

So yeah, overall, i thought this was very nice, but some tweakage could make it even better. gj!!! i approve :D
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scoutzero responds:

I'll use your suggestions when I'm working on something else, and hopefully it will be better. :)

I will check out your stuff as soon as I have the chance. Thanks!

wonderful!

extremely well made, i have to say. you are officially favorited! gj :)

all i have to say is it sounded a little cliched, but the production quality and intensity is enough to redeem urself. YAY you beat my angry, violent prejudices against overdone trance songs :)

i like the mood

the first half was very nice, it was relaxing and pumpin. though as the song progressed i didnt really like the reese that came in later, it was just not harmonious with the chill vibes of the song imho. overall its pretty good tho, drum patterns were nice [though i wish at the part where the reece came in it was more varied since thats the more intense, spastic part of the song, and thats what i see in good dnb (personal opinion, I KNOW I KNOW :))] <--too many parentheses

gj on it! i give u a 4 [SORRY DUDE :((] <--too many parentheses, again!!

tastyyy

man this is getting rated so harshly, ill comment this way--it is what it is. its not a song, its not a full composition, maybe some background stuff in a flash id say.

the bells' contrasting melodies made it sound kinda interesting since it sounds like such a happy instrument. im seeing... some kinda tense, calm before the storm sort of scene :D

though i do think it could use some more elements imho, and i wish it was slower.

ty for the rev!! ill think about collabbing as i get more time on my hands and drive in my work ethic, but we'll figure somethign out ;D

GronmonSE responds:

Haha, I don't mind the low scores on this one. It's really a quickjob that I decided to submit as a loop, hoping someone would use it as a background sound for their flash. Yes, that's the feeling I was aiming for.

Thanks for the review :D

yay fun

i posted about ur post on the thread about the PA system and you ranting (http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/
835608) ... so read that too.

but my personal opinion about the song is that this was pretty fun, being chiptunes and all :D so cute. though i agree with endless number a bit [though i consider his conclusion bs!!]--some of the note choices seem a bit strange in the way the two leads work together [but its still good. *glares at endless number lol*], though on teh whole they are harmonious.

i think it woulda been nice if you used those noisy chiptune snares somewhere in there, but thats jst me.

yay chiptunes!! yay you. gj ;)

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funnnn

i liked the beat and the synth choices, fx, and everything, this is a pretty good song :D jst some things sound kinda hesitant [like one of the synths starts stutterring for some reason lol idk if its just me] and the mixing is kinda muddy, but otherwise very tighthttt!!
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vipertarun responds:

Thanx bro............the stuttering maybe due to the echo and reverb.........its not you even i felt it............thanx for the review............and im just checking out your stuff!!!!!!!!

wow

the peopel below me are gay. giving u a 0 just beause of the category instead of teh song itself? well i thought it was well done and relaxing. gj :)

yum

this was okay, but the percussion was getting too distorted and making my ears lke ring lol

the synths and stuff themselves were good tho, so gj on that :D
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hehe this was okay

when the lead synth came in at 2:03 it reminded me of this one .midi song i got a while ago... aryx by karsten koch, its like so similar!!

well overall this was pretty good but some of teh instruments seemed kinda strange like the intro bell things and the claps seemed kinda out there. but overall, tight!
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so fresh, so smooth.

i love how everything seems so chill and restrained. makes a really cool and smooth atmosphere, relaxing and almost kinda jazzy lol. i approve :D
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